A video created by students at Evergreen College is being shared around the internet. This video shows student activists sharing their feelings at a meeting with university President George Bridges. Problems arose after a student was found to have shared a recording of the meeting without the activist’s consent.
Evergreen College released a statement in support of the student activists threatening legal action against the individual who shared the video.
As the student activists were not comfortable with others knowing of their contributions to society. Furthermore, the video contained adult language and offensive rhetoric regarding white people.
Martin Luther King Jr. would likely have been shocked to see what these student activists consider to be protesting. But, activism and education quality has changed over the years
The video from this student protest is available on the next page
The behavior of these kids was revealed when a new video emerged showing juvenile racist students screaming derogatory slurs at administrators during a meeting with university President George Bridges and other facility members.
Could tighten up the writing by eliminating verbiage. Like from the above “the behavior of these kids was revealed” doesn’t need to be there.
Hopefully, these “activities” students have parents with a little sense left in their heads who’ll do the right thing and go straight down to the campus to whoop a little decency into their stupid little brains.
Not well written. Hard to understand the first half, and stuff like ‘stupid little brains’ doesn’t serve well. I am all for dressing down idiots, but it must not come off as making insults just to insult. If you want to insult their intelligence, do so in a way that imparts meaning at the same time. For example, instead of saying “stupid”, say “warped by liberal professors” or some such thing.
I am going to send this back as it is too riddled with petty insults. Here’s a tip: let the audience do the insulting, do more reporting and interpreting through the lens of an educated writer.
If you do all the insulting, you leave none for the readers. They will feel like it’s been done for them. But, if instead of insulting you say “he is accusing the teacher of xxx”. “He probably adopted that snowflake mindset from the liberal teacher he is insulting”, etc. Then, you invoke a response from the audience
Thank you for the detailed feedback! Making a note for future reference as well.
Very true about verbiage. Not something noticed too much till pointed out. Forget to read stuff I write objectively at times – separate what I think in head from what I actually wrote.
What a bunch of fucking douchebags.
Shut the entire college down, expel all students, fumigate and then re-open with a Marine Drill Sgt. as an Administrator.
Expel these idiots…stop allowing unruly children to run your universities!
And who’s fault is this? The administrations because the didn’t have the guts to stand up to these unruly idiots.
Do people really believe that the elites, for even a micro second, will let the minority, any minority group, become the, for lack of a better word, leaders of this nation? White elitist run this world. Look at the secret society. The ones meeting in mansions with total secrecy. They meet and things change. Right now they have liberals in puppet strings but I guarantee you there is method to their madness. Trump threw a wrench into their plans and they are trying to work around him and they will do whatever it takes to keep hidden the overwhelming corruption in our government’s. Not just in white house and Senate and Congress but in our local governments. The killing of people who find out too much is getting more and more apparent. Hillary was their puppet to follow the puppet obama. Bush was a part and so was clinton. All the illegal votes and the masses amounts of money Hillary had could not disrupt our election. I am sure they are working on that as we speak. We have a hope with trump that their nefarious plans will be ripped apart by draining our swamp of detestables. The bible does not mention our country by name but we believe that we are referred to as wings of an eagle and will align with Israel and not be a part of the one works world government. This will obviously mean that we somehow break away for Soros evil grouo and they will keep their g6, which will end of being a g10. God out Trump where he is because our country has gotten on their knees and asked for God’s help. Like Pence said. If my people humble themselves and fall to their knees and ask for help, He will heal our land. Keep praying in your knees, we can overcome and we will only do it with out savior.